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Free verse № 154076

Holding You

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Oct 2007 · 1 comment

The other day I heard a man Say for something he would do all he can That it's all he wants in the world It got me thinking all I want is for you to be my girl He said he'd give up anything for this Well he must have been talking about your kiss Cause if I was a rich man and owned it all Then I'd trade it for a kiss to feel real tall To match the growth in my heart since we met It's been filled to the point of busting I bet How many more wonderful feelings can I have inside It's like being a child and going on all the rides You got my heart racing baby and it feels so good Far better then I ever imaged it ever could In fact the only thing I've known to be better Was when I dreamt I was holding you so I wrote you this letter

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[5] pete 18-Oct-07/7:54 AM Reply
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