poemranker ::Alice to Slumber by Skamper

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Free verse № 154093

Alice to Slumber

Member since 2007 · Posted 15 Oct 2007 · 5 comments

I said off with her head! knife slipping... she has alice eyes and a band slicing through her hair oh! sweetie how well your skin fits and crimson glows on peach you know? don't mind them they like to touch - flowers are so pretty just before they bud unbutton yourself we never see your like- so white - delicious - more tea? a laugh - royale it's just a game - dear blade licking - more cake? alice stroking petals curling sure - wiping fingers on her tongue open up and I'll cut you a slice hmmm? how frustrating... baby blue strips sticky- puddles- did she come I didn't know a shredded thing peaked so pinkly did you?

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[10] INTRANSIT 16-Oct-07/2:56 PM Reply
zoiks.
[n/a] Skamper › INTRANSIT 19-Oct-07/5:42 AM Reply
:)
[7] pete 18-Oct-07/7:48 AM Reply
scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius
[n/a] Skamper › pete 19-Oct-07/5:43 AM Reply
I think you got it :)
[8] Ranger 6-Oct-08/4:39 PM Reply
lol, fantastic.