Forever Moving On

Member since 2007 · Posted 24 Oct 2007 · 1 comment

I'm walking on glass. I'm walking through a hot desert. I'm carrying this burden upon my back. I'm not able to stop. Forever Moving On. This is life.

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[n/a] Dental Panic 24-Oct-07/4:24 PM Reply

I, as a member of the FMO, am simply stupified by the sublime accuracy of your poem.