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Dulacca - for a day

Member since 2007 · Posted 29 Oct 2007 · 8 comments

laying bets on big over small kelly pool of numbers scratched on scraps of torn up beer coasters going for the five wondering who will lose to the pocket back left slight angle potted - white ambles awkwardly stops lolls over patchy felt levelled by a folded menu torn and tucked under one wooden leg six pairs of denying eyes smile on cue thumping sticks warriors chant - good shot and nice one juke-box spins another tortured country death song we all know the words assume accents and postures relevant licking salted lips the barman collects - rubbish fag butts occasional smiles crisp packets split and scattered on the faded tablecloth and hope we spend a little more time/money/whatever A road-train thunders past out rumbled by laughter wise cracks and smoky grins another layer of dust settles on the fading sign which once proudly read Free Beer - Today Only now just a smudge on the drivers side window and the talking head above the bar nods...

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8 comments

[8] Dovina 1-Nov-07/8:39 AM Reply
A nice nostalgia. Where is this joint?
[10] INTRANSIT › Dovina 2-Nov-07/5:59 AM Reply
I'm guessing it's Austrailia. (sp?) He mentions a road train. Aussies run like 6 or more 53 footers with one tractor, Hence, r/t. I too, really like this. The kelly pool. Ha! Almost missed it.
[n/a] Skamper › Dovina 2-Nov-07/2:48 PM Reply
halfway between Roma and Mitchell in the south of Queensland, Australia. Dulacca - population 60, pub 1, free camping out the back of the pub (the reason we stayed there), free beer, a trap for unsuspecting tourists, purchase of a slab (24 cans) and you get 6 free...none of us drink beer so we enjoyed the free camping, with no strings and played pool all night. :)
[8] Dovina › Skamper 2-Nov-07/3:36 PM Reply
cool
[10] INTRANSIT › Dovina 3-Nov-07/8:07 AM Reply
A "slab" of beer ? That IS cool. What's a twelver called? A sixer?
[n/a] Skamper › INTRANSIT 3-Nov-07/10:13 PM Reply
half a slab and a six-pack...not very inventive, but hey, we are kinda lazy...

p.s He is a She
[10] INTRANSIT › Skamper 4-Nov-07/5:27 AM Reply
Oh! My sincerest apologies.
[n/a] Skamper › INTRANSIT 4-Nov-07/3:47 PM Reply
NP..it's happened before and I'm sure it'll happen again. :)

Do I write like a male?