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A Cyclamatic Word of Advice

Member since 2007 · Posted 19 Nov 2007 · Edited 21 Nov 2007 · 8 comments

ask another stupid question yes there is such a thing it's here now resplendant on your tongue stop telling me it's natural as if the bleeding and the breathing are one and the same you missed the right to sympathize in the alphabetical shuffle of sexual determination just pass me a: towel smoke paracetemol and leave me to: dry sleep self indulge at this moment you are denied existence in any station other than servitude 'til the healing when I'll forgive you

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[10] INTRANSIT 20-Nov-07/8:02 AM Reply

Cyclamatic ? Wow. There's a word. Say, is it just me, or do I rely way too much on images to do my speaking for me?

This is really good Skamper. Not sure about that -maybe-.

[n/a] Skamper › INTRANSIT 21-Nov-07/1:13 AM Reply

thanks again...your input is appreciated and I dropped the 'maybe' don't know why I added it, cos there's no maybe about it.

relying way too much on images to speak for you - isn't that what we do, draw the image in words?

[10] INTRANSIT 21-Nov-07/6:18 AM Reply

This reminds me of one I wrote where a woman gives back an engagement ring. And his rib.

[n/a] Skamper › INTRANSIT 26-Nov-07/5:08 PM Reply

point me in the direction - or repost, would like to read that.

[10] deleted user 22-Nov-07/5:25 AM Reply

Great stuff skamper--the first stanza really sets the tone for the rest of the poem. Nice work.

[n/a] Skamper › deleted user 26-Nov-07/5:10 PM Reply

thanks Paul - I have been toying with writing something like this for a while

[10] malpaso 22-Nov-07/1:22 PM Reply

I would hate to be the one on the other end of THAT laser. Hey is this website in the UK?

[n/a] Skamper › malpaso 26-Nov-07/5:12 PM Reply

lol...stay well clear when the signs present... I think this is a US site, not sure tho