poemranker ::A-looky here. by malpaso

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A-looky here.

Member since 2007 · Posted 22 Nov 2007 · 2 comments

It's about me but i don't know it so i narrate like i don't know what's going on but the reader has an omniscient pov. The setting is life, like a big mother board where i am insignicant but something is happening all around me and somehow i stumble onto a pixel that mutates my existence, multiplies my importance but i don't know it. But the rest 0f the vast motherboard starts to take notice----It's like i become an irritant particle in a huge membrane who becomes important and if the membrane/motherboard doesn't get me to adapt, somethin' a-shitty is a-goin' ta happen---And that affects me Big cheshire cat smile because who knows, i might still be around but i'll be sooo alone...so i start writing. Wow, man, that's fuckin' heavy, man. Snnnneeerrrrrrrk!!!

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[n/a] malpaso 27-Nov-07/3:27 PM Reply
pov stands for point of view, skamper.
[8] Skamper › malpaso 28-Dec-07/11:37 PM Reply
oh duh! Of course it does...I can be dense...and I knew I had commented on this one, but it seems to have disappeared.