poemranker ::INDIGO SUMMER by LynnJR

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Free verse № 154751

INDIGO SUMMER

Member since 2007 · Posted 22 Dec 2007 · 0 comments

(for Christopher - AKA Indigobruh) Sitting on the beach the air grabs hold of me. It’s hot and humid sand sticks to my skin. The heat lulls me into a dream. I dream of an intimate encounter during one indigo summer day. The sun, vibrant and fiery red is an ardent lover pursuing the ocean, enticed by the sensuous whispers of the waves, wanting to be consumed in the coolness of its waters, attracted to its blueness and passion that knows no depth. The ocean flows calmly and unsuspecting not aware it is being seduced, the redness of the sun grows and illuminates the sky it moves ever so closely descending upon the ocean ever so gently they kiss the waters grow hot and torrid, reaching out towards the sands like a lover reluctantly fighting but slowly giving into desire and as they melt into one creating this chromatic color of reddish blue background the sun pulls the sky down over them like a sheet and night falls.

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