poemranker ::Light show by winniss

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Free verse № 154955

Light show

Member since 2007 · Posted 27 Feb 2008 · Edited 9 Mar 2008 · 2 comments

To the light, the people go. Masquerading for a show. Turn the light out, watch them go. Back to people they don't know.

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[6] Dovina 11-Mar-08/3:34 PM Reply
ok, nice rhythm, ok rhyme. What's the point?
[5] Dark Angle 12-Mar-08/1:22 AM Reply
there could be something good here, maybe a couple more stanzas would help to flush it out.