poemranker ::HATE ME, LOVE by alvinb

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Free verse № 154967

HATE ME, LOVE

Member since 2006 · Posted 5 Mar 2008 · 1 comment

How can I prove my love for you? All the time I talk to you... Time and time I show my love... Every slash I give my pulse... My heart is tired of loving... Everytime my tears is flowing... Loved one will you love me back? Or will you just throw my love? Vanquish my soul full of this... Envy to the world... ____________________________ READ THE LEFT SIDE FROM TOP TO BOTTOM...

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[2] Dark Angle 12-Mar-08/1:42 AM Reply
instead of writing a poorly drafted suicide note, why not write about the story behind what when wrong, that would be 100 times more interesting.