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Goodnight

by Nepanthe

Member since 2007 · Posted 8 Mar 2008 · 2 comments

You have me moving like long grass in storms. Goodnight, I wave goodnight. my friend. Wave all I will, I'm stuck in this place. Of all things arms can do with grace- Wave at retreating forms, fade from sight. Goodnight.

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[5] Dark Angle 12-Mar-08/1:24 AM Reply
i like "of all things arms can do with grace" a lot. the rest of the song, eh. maybe i just need to hear it.
[n/a] Nepanthe › Dark Angle 12-Mar-08/5:09 AM Reply
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It's the first song currently, I already see that retreating needs to be changed to receding. I have changed "Wave all that I will...." to "Thrash all that I will, I'm stuck in my place". If you have anymore insight as to improving the lyrics after listening please tell me.