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Free verse № 15549

shape shifter

by mogwai

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

You on the kitchen floor, her standing. You tracing the outline of her shadow on the floor with a magic marker, her turning too soon. You wondering why she's always changing shape.

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[8] <~> 17-Sep-02/7:21 AM Reply
clever image.
[8] deleted user 17-Sep-02/7:40 AM Reply
this is nice. i thought it was going to be some dorky sci-fi thing (which i probably would have liked, despite myself). something slow and creepy about these images.