poemranker ::Complete.Death.Destiny. by LucidRevelation

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Complete.Death.Destiny.

by LucidRevelation

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 4 comments

Slit the throat of your terror. Remove your yellow belly. Let the blood that is your life slide down and trickle in to all of the crevices filling in the absence of your breath. Now you are c o m p l e t e and worldly. You stain the path that leads to your own d e a t h. You have marked your d e s t i n y

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[n/a] deleted user 26-Jun-02/1:56 AM Reply
Obtuse.
[4] -=SeTTle=- 21-Jul-02/2:55 PM Reply
How much do you weigh?
[n/a] LucidRevelation 21-Jul-02/3:31 PM Reply
Um, why?
[4] -=SeTTle=- 21-Jul-02/8:52 PM Reply
aside from the uncontrollable sobbing, there is nothing sexy about douching.