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Free verse № 155926

Suicide Note(Broken Down)

Member since 2006 · Posted 25 Aug 2008 · Edited 28 Aug 2008 · 3 comments

I made a red river with my knife... A red river flowing at the middle of the night... And tomorrow it''l be a big lake... So it'll drown this world i can't take...

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[7] Bethy 2-Sep-08/9:51 AM Reply
Life is beautiful, this life is sad. A hug for the writer of the note. :)
[n/a] alvinb › Bethy 8-Sep-08/1:04 AM Reply
tnx man,...
[2] SupremeDreamer 5-Sep-08/6:46 PM Reply
I have a better exit stategy.