Haiku № 155977 :: a stroll by elementalidad Member since 2008 · Posted 4 Sep 2008 · 2 comments dew drop turns to frost crossing the park through the grass- crisp and clear the sound! Rate it 0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Worst Best Send crowd 4.0 mean 4.00 weighted 4.95 rank 8851 views 132 View voting details → 2 votes so far. Yours would make 3.2 votes so far A random poem →N
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drop "the" before grass
lose the !
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