:: snowsounds

by elementalidad

Member since 2008 · Posted 4 Sep 2008 · 6 comments

owl greets the snowfall silent night and wide awake fieldmouse heeds the tune

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6 comments

[7] SupremeDreamer 5-Sep-08/6:08 PM Reply

...Why is it I have this feeling that I've read something very close to this before?... -shrug-

[n/a] elementalidad › SupremeDreamer 6-Sep-08/6:53 AM Reply

I don't have many sources to pull from for writing haikus other than my imagination. Perhaps the picture painted here might be too predictable or just plain common?

[7] SupremeDreamer › elementalidad 7-Sep-08/1:40 PM Reply

Well I'm sure I've read other poems with reference to owls, etc. Don't mind me, I suffer from periodic strikes of deja-vu.

[8] Dovina 6-Sep-08/6:34 AM Reply

not bad, just that the harness of 575, like corsets, is too restricting and unnecessary even in haiku and church.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › Dovina 10-Sep-08/10:20 AM Reply

I'm gonna back Dovina. Loosen the reins a little element-

[8] Bethy 12-Sep-08/9:27 AM Reply

great haiku :)