poemranker ::night owl (5) by elementalidad

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Senryu № 156132

night owl (5)

by elementalidad

Member since 2008 · Posted 29 Sep 2008 · 2 comments

family asleep in separate rooms peace at last

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mean 9.00 weighted 5.19 rank 4742 views 143 View voting details →

2 votes so far. Yours would make 3.2 votes so far

A favorite of Ranger.

2 comments

[9] Bethy 29-Sep-08/10:14 AM Reply
oh the sweet sound of peace... :)
[9] Ranger 6-Oct-08/4:53 PM Reply
I know more or less nothing about Japanese poetry, but this is a shining example of how good simplicity can be in poetry. Your others try to be a bit too poetic, whereas this makes the reader do all the work without realising it. Top drawer.