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One of the guys

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Oct 2008 · 2 comments

I've never felt such pain knowing that I've found All that I want He doesn't feel the same Longing for his love And Suddenly I see his face turning away avoiding my gaze Months have passed and when he walks by He Still looks away hiding his eyes It is my fault I created this mess I showed him my heart He couldn't care less His anger at me Is due to the stress I created in our world One day he said Our paths will cross And all will be behind I will feel no longer lost I am to wait in case this is so dying inside Watching him go by, Wanting to say hi Never fall in love with a friend who is one of the guys

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[7] Dovina 1-Nov-08/3:27 PM Reply
This leaves me wondering about several things, and not getting it. Tell me what is wrong with falling in love with a friend, one of the guys or not. Was he really a friend if he did this? What kind of judge of character are you?
[n/a] hobojo › Dovina 1-Nov-08/4:46 PM Reply
Sorry to post such personal poems - i made everything awkward in my group of friends and he is avoiding me - he did no wrong -