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when light cannot see your face (Free verse) by daggatolar when light cannot see my face
the pale fear i wear
can only in the dark live
tell me friend ....Oh enemy
how you can hate me to die for me
for only then can i die
i can see all the light there is
in the sun ... to see and know danger
when light cannot see my face
i cannot understand
Up the ladder:
Never to Part
Down the ladder:
Mystic Castle
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Posted: December 1, 2008 1:48 AM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2008 1:48 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.762871 Overall Rank: 11558 Comments:
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DreamerSupreme @ 75.18.164.147
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15-Dec-08/6:44 AM
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Apparently you also can not write either. Stop grasping for the appearance of profoundness. You haven't gripped upon anything but the air and your own literary flatulence.
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