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Graveyard(Cry of the living) (Free verse) by alvinb
Sorry for not visiting you... I'm so busy I can't be with you... Just wait for me, I'll be there... I'm wanting to see your lovely stare... Wait for me... Wait for me... Be patient... I haven't forgotten you, my love... I'll be with you this afternoon... and be forever with you soon...

Up the ladder: Artemis and the Rain
Down the ladder: the rugby cheer

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8086
Posted: March 23, 2009 1:29 AM PDT; Last modified: March 23, 2009 1:29 AM PDT
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[3] Christof @ 87.115.33.229 | 6-Apr-09/6:39 AM | Reply
A lovely stare? Lovely forced rhyme, more like it.
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