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Free verse № 157104

I said no salt!

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 May 2009 · 0 comments

take what I say with a grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued I put my heart out for you let my veins bleed for you I poured my soul out with my words and then you threw them in my face and used them against me, why me take what I say with a grain of salt a lowly fucking grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued My anger boils on the surface I can't hold it in It's dieing to get out hungers for a debt to be repaid you brought it on, it's your fault take what I say with a grain of salt a lowely fucking grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued I gave you my words I gave you a piece of me a piece of my life you threw it all back at me maybe I'm foolish, maybe my fault take what I say with a grain of salt a lowly fucking grain of salt I came unglued I said unglued I hate you I hate you you gave me unforgiveable anger you put that in my heart all I see is red, a blood lust god you tore us apart you did your best to drive a wedge between us Because of you, I am empty I'm so angry, i don't know what to do I am unglued

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