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Free verse № 157215

precipitation

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Jul 2009 · 0 comments

a placid scene under eyeliner horizon dew drops tearing across canopied skies roiling thunder shaking the earth and heavens a flood falls, staining porcelain facade the stream snaking its way through flat-topped mountains and forests untouched by man the river returning to its origin a sordid spring once wet with creation now run dry by rage

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