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Free verse № 157231

it's wonderful

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jul 2009 · 0 comments

any where with you is wonderful you're that little quirk in my smile 'cause I know we'll have each other for a while The times we share are what make our world go 'round baby you got me and baby I got you it's wonderful but baby I gotta ask, where are you now you ain't here I feel empty with out you it's breakin' my heart I want to know, what are you doin' are you ok I hope you think and feel the same as me not knowing is like poison in my veins i care so much and it's wonderful my heart is beating in your back seat as you drove down the street I'd say I would give my right arm to have you with me now but I'm not mine to give because you have all of me and it's wonderful we're going pell mell full throttle who knows if there will be a catastrophic accident at the end of our road but baby I could care less because we are careening out of control we've given in to what we have and it is ecstasy, it's wonderful My heart is pouring out, red raining down, passion, lust, love, happiness, contentment, desire all cascading up and down and out all at once. not even the Hoover Dam could hold back what I feel and it's

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