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Member since 2009 · Posted 6 Sep 2009 · 0 comments

the ice cracked, and creaked, creaking open. exposing black, blacked out, leaked leaking spirit sparkle tokens. if you nail it shut - - spirits touch touched will spiral it open the ice is just gone, soon melts once broken. your with the open sea. the harbour is clear. there is only me.

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