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Free verse № 157764

To Writing

by Lifeboatman

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Oct 2009 · 2 comments

Make me whole again I implore you And I dare ask, "Where have you gone? Where did you go? Why did you leave me?" More than a decade I could still remember the last word I put into paper And I still feel that smile Across my sad little face As I put the final stroke from my pen "Why did you leave? Where you ever here before or was I just dreaming" "And why, with all the things I imagine you say I can still not hear any words?"

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[4] SupremeDreamer 15-Oct-09/2:59 AM Reply
You know this isn't anywhere near as good as you could make it. Four.
[n/a] Lifeboatman › SupremeDreamer 24-Oct-09/6:12 AM Reply
I know. That's what surprises me. Really, these days, all i make up is crap. But I keep forcing myself to write all this crap. Something switched off some time ago. Just don't know what and don't know when.