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A little song

by kawakurdi

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

When she gets angry I turn into waves and get lost in the sea When she gets gloomy I turn into a wind and cuddle her like a tree When she smiles to me I turn into a bird and fly afar to get her a star and keep her for ever happy.

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4 comments

[10] jonnyduk 19-Sep-02/4:11 AM Reply
well cute (don't tell ne1 im a boy)
[4] Tintagiles 30-Oct-02/9:02 PM Reply
Awww...
[n/a] royalflesh 30-Oct-02/11:37 PM Reply
u sir, make human-stuffy afraid. watch your back and balls next time you step up to the urinal. pillow. please.
[7] Quarton 19-Jan-03/6:56 AM Reply
Not bad. Short and sweet. Typo in last line. For ever should be forever.