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February

Member since 2006 · Posted 24 Jan 2010 · Edited 24 Jan 2010 · 3 comments

Winter breaks and my love is fresh. In the chill of the wind she poses, beautiful in her wool layers. With a kiss, we warm.

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[7] Dovina 1-Feb-10/4:35 PM Reply

why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?

[n/a] half.italian 1-Feb-10/10:03 PM Reply

Thanks for responding. :)

ok...It was just a simple point in time type thing, but I see where you are going.

What type of payoff do you generally look for in a poem?

I guess I was only trying to convey a feeling. Nothing more. I see that it could seem "incomplete" for some people.

I'll see if I can expand on it.

Have you submitted anything recently? This site needs some tlc from poem makers.

[1] daniella 14-Sep-14/6:25 PM Reply

this is just not written well