what is poetry 101

by Skamper

Member since 2007 · Posted 30 Aug 2012 · 10 comments

the door swung inward did i request your presence imagination

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[2] SupremeDreamer 11-Feb-13/3:25 PM Reply

Is this some sort of shitty attempt at a Haiku? Yes. It is. Labeling it free verse does not hide this fact.

[n/a] Skamper › SupremeDreamer 17-Feb-13/12:29 AM Reply

this is some sort of shitty attempt at senryu...labelling it free verse was my choice. Your ignorant review speakes only of your own stupidity

[2] SupremeDreamer › Skamper 18-Feb-13/2:01 PM Reply

Ignorant eh? Quibbling over a minor detail eh? The essential point is this: IT IS STILL SHIT!

:)

[n/a] Skamper 24-Mar-13/4:32 AM Reply

ah...now we get to the gist of the review...the form is mute. Your need to vent your childish/spitefulness is forefront. No matter how much you SHOUT doesn't make you right. An opinion is valid only with genuine thought.

[2] SupremeDreamer › Skamper 27-Mar-13/7:55 PM Reply

Genuine? So are you insinuating that someone other than I came up with this thought? ... O.K. retard. I must be a puppet then? Right...!!!!

[2] SupremeDreamer › Skamper 27-Mar-13/8:01 PM Reply

BTW.. Just take notice that no one else bothered to respond to this crap... I'm the only one who genuinely thought to give a fuck, vote, and voice my UNIQUE opinion. Everyone responded with?... Silence. Biatch! How do you like that one? Eh? Also, text doesn't shout, even in capitals, unless your brain processes it so. :X GEN-U-WHINE. Now skamper along, punk.

[2] SupremeDreamer 27-Mar-13/8:08 PM Reply

You know why you're so mad? Because I didn't declare it the greatest piece I've ever read... What is poetry? You thought to express that in a senryu/haiku? Mr. Haiku would punch you in the face. Honestly, he would. In my hey-day? I'd have awarded you with a fucking zero. Don't get all defensive and BUTT-HURT!!!
Oh shit, did the yelling upset you? ... Fucking asshat. Be thankful this isn't face to face... I'd let you know what yelling sounds like. :D

[n/a] Skamper 20-Apr-14/12:29 AM Reply

first of all...thankyou for your passion and extreme reaction...forgoing the obvious, that you really need sedation or at the very least intervention. I know I am a POET, and you are merely another wannabe nay-sayer who, will felicitate my rise to fame. Skamper

[n/a] ARTIE › Skamper 17-Aug-14/11:20 PM Reply

Skamper - I am trying to imagine.....
Better yet, take a chill pill whilst I ponder first.
Stress kills. Breathe deeply...... use your imagination.

[9] T. Jonathron Remp 23-Dec-14/9:52 AM Reply

correct