poemranker ::Fall by morffrom

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Lyric № 16004

Fall

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Sep 2002 · 5 comments

Mists and frosts rhyme, Winds that cut, Too much water all the time, Leaves are scarlet, red, Doors are shut, Nothing said, Everything Dead.

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5 comments

[9] dolores 19-Sep-02/6:10 AM Reply
Ain't that the truth though
[n/a] heroditus 21-Sep-02/5:02 AM Reply
Concise and punchy-10/10
[5] Tintagiles 25-Sep-02/9:04 PM Reply
'Mists and frosts rhyme' is damn good. The rest leaves to be desired.
[9] Venus 3-Oct-02/12:02 AM Reply
9/10
[6] Quarton 21-Jan-03/9:36 AM Reply
Short and sweet but it doesn't do much for me personally. Still, not bad and with an interesting theme.