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Free verse № 160081

Among The Stars

by ARTIE

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2014 · Edited 7 Apr 2015 · 1 comment

When you feel your heart talking, and you can't foretell what it has to say, cast your eyes to the stars, upon that velvet way, and if a shooting star should turn the night sky to day, walk with me, far and away.

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[3] Y2kSlamPoet 13-Apr-15/4:06 PM Reply
My heart speaks not.
It pulses with pulsars
while drinkin' at the bar
Goes cold while I'm hot
'n encourages me
to take another shot
till the last thing I see
is the blasted stars.