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Free verse № 16515

The End OF Me

by Birdman42s

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

The End OF Me A wall of pain to burst my being And all the days of my life. It disassembled pieces of me, but I try to pick them up. I take time to reassemble but I can't seem to get it right. Missing parts of me, my soul. The pain impairs my sight To lift the weights off me That I carry day to day I'll be lighter yet from the heaviest pain This day I desire to see Or it will be the end of me. DLB

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3 comments

[10] vulcan 22-Sep-02/11:28 AM Reply
Nice,10!
[8] INTRANSIT 22-Sep-02/7:00 PM Reply
If at first you don't succeed...
Iron it out, otherwise it works.
[10] deleted user 3-Nov-02/7:09 AM Reply
Wow! Love the way you rapped it up 2.