Beloved Infidel

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 3 comments

Listlessly creeping; Lamenting, but always keeping Track of every thought Blood still seeping These dreams remain sleeping Beloved infidel Discordant to your process In your words I could never confess That would grant you access Which you don?t deserve I won?t crack under duress Arpeggios on your violin Bad poetry in reams What more can I say? You?ve picked apart my schemes Who else can you mesmerize? Lies inside prayers Still choke me Now absolved Everything solved, But has anyone evolved?

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[n/a] ifni 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

I must be slow... I don't get the point.

[5] SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/10:41 PM Reply

okay i think that the poet is pissed or hurt.... im not real sure cus the poem dont make a whole lotta sence. oh well i give ya a 5 just cus u confussed the hello outta me.

[7] Brittanyy 19-Jun-04/8:32 AM Reply

Ok, this poem was just a bad excuse to use big words..Haha..That wasnt very nice of me to say but..It was OK so I will grant you a -7-