poemranker ::Twilight by grrund

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Free verse № 16783

Twilight

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Sep 2002 · Edited 23 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

The day ends and twilight begins, Your eyes twinkle like a star so bright, Beauty, Oh goddess, what a sight. Your heart more wonderous than a starry night, Capitvated, My soul finally screams free of blight. Eliose's beauty you may be not quite, Alluring, Where all kings must bow to you at night. Finally, awash in your golden light, Sadness, My heart cries as you fade like a wight. There is only darkness, nothing more in sight, Completion, I dream sweet dreams of you tonight. For love starts in the twilight.

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[7] OneFingerAnswer 23-Sep-02/8:58 PM Reply
What is a wight?
[7] vulcan 24-Sep-02/8:25 AM Reply
A tender filial expression.Nice7