poemranker ::Best Friends by Chels85

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Free verse № 16992

Best Friends

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

We were the very best of friends, not so very long ago. What happened to that special bond, I may never know. You and I were one of a kind, Another like me, you will never find. The same goes for me! I look at the picture of us on the wall, Wondering, as I think of you, if you ever think me of at all? Do you miss me, as I miss you? Thinking of fun times, and things we used to do. Like driving in my car, singing with all our might, And going for a drive in the middle of the night! I've never cared for a friend, as much as I care for you, I just want to be the very best of friends again, please tell me that you do too. And what I could do to make this dream come true??? You know things about me, that no one else does, it's the same for me with you! You know how I think, and it's the same with you. You told me so much and I did my best to understand If at all I falter, I hope you will be there to lend me a hand and try to understand! Your shoulder was always open, for my tears to flow freely, I just wander if you have changed your mind?! I hope you will always be there in every way you can, a place where I can go to feel right at home! I'm telling you this now, so you will know how I truly feel, Hoping any anger or confusion, will someday quickly heal, so that we can be best friends still!

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4 comments

[0] poetandknowit 24-Sep-02/8:10 PM Reply
I'm sorry, this was so painful I could not make it through the first five lines.
[3] Tintagiles 25-Sep-02/7:31 PM Reply
Too many exclamation marks, among other things. Far too many. Especially since they're useless.
[8] gadget 2-Oct-02/9:19 AM Reply
Really enjoyed it
[4] rockinindividual 25-Jan-03/1:17 PM Reply
the rhyme scheme seems kind of forced...and then it doesnt match a real rhythm of any kind....4