Told m -e the story of he beginning And why so- me body's bi -rth Is some- one else's worth--less--ness <Softball lover> No more wedding day wishes When families are structures Hol- ding up nothing but carictures Mickey mouse is God... <Walt butt-fucked- L . Ron in a Pasadena bright-white- head{walk towards...light, and enjoy your senic view} {you'll feel safer} {now kneel} {lover} +++ -A- cross the vast stre- tch of la- nd A tide doth lap cleansing Gentle rhythm ime doth call is recycling is so more than love and tender happine. so much more than one could imagine a... oh sweet jesus show me to my bunny ea... mushro- om mix a nibble upon the soul of a lovely j- ew a waf er thin pi ece of the sweet bab y jesus... than fronti er land for sure this time....." /> Told m -e the story of he beginning And why so- me body's bi -rth Is some- one else's worth--less--ness <Softball lover> No more wedding day wishes When families are structures Hol- ding up nothing but carictures Mickey mouse is God... <Walt butt-fucked- L . Ron in a Pasadena bright-white- head{walk towards...light, and enjoy your senic view} {you'll feel safer} {now kneel} {lover} +++ -A- cross the vast stre- tch of la- nd A tide doth lap cleansing Gentle rhythm ime doth call is recycling is so more than love and tender happine. so much more than one could imagine a... oh sweet jesus show me to my bunny ea... mushro- om mix a nibble upon the soul of a lovely j- ew a waf er thin pi ece of the sweet bab y jesus... than fronti er land for sure this time....." />
poemranker ::Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8

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Liberty bells & Disney Land

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Sep 2002 · Edited 20 Jan 2003 · 13 comments

. __________ <Perhaps Mu ?> Steady erosion Large to small When action of an indifferent universe <Fabric softne.. Devours unsuspecting planets Attracting to their mora. Nature needs no consciousness <how's that for a smil. Natural disasters Make way for the young Step aside 'usin fire eats the old To feed the new Evapo-ra hington cow poo "Stick that in yo- -ur honey sprea- d", was what t- he pointed hats said My small- toad stool tea- chers <Guess pants>Told m -e the story of he beginning And why so- me body's bi -rth Is some- one else's worth--less--ness <Softball lover> No more wedding day wishes When families are structures Hol- ding up nothing but carictures Mickey mouse is God... <Walt butt-fucked- L . Ron in a Pasadena bright-white- head{walk towards...light, and enjoy your senic view} {you'll feel safer} {now kneel} {lover} +++ -A- cross the vast stre- tch of la- nd A tide doth lap cleansing Gentle rhythm ime doth call is recycling is so more than love and tender happine. so much more than one could imagine a... oh sweet jesus show me to my bunny ea... mushro- om mix a nibble upon the soul of a lovely j- ew a waf er thin pi ece of the sweet bab y jesus... than fronti er land for sure this time.....

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[8] god'swife 30-Sep-02/1:15 PM Reply
Very powerful towards the end. I like the way this thing builds. Line 7 seems to have a grammatical error of some kind, or I just don't get it.
[9] Venus 2-Oct-02/11:20 PM Reply
9/10
[6] Dark Angle 5-Oct-02/12:38 AM Reply
an exciting journey through the mind of a mad man, reminds me of brad pitts character in tweleve monkies
[4] Tintagiles 30-Oct-02/8:49 PM Reply
I'm sure. Did you know that poppycock is derived from the Dutch papecack, which means 'soft dung'? I wonder how many nice proper little old ladies swearing sweetly are aware of that.
[n/a] horus8 › Tintagiles 30-Oct-02/11:24 PM Reply
i am now...graffically..unfortunately..still, nothing is worse then stepping in cold, or a warm puddle of puppy pee in a winter month back east.
[9] deleted user 20-Jan-03/5:44 PM Reply
ring a ding ding.
[n/a] horus8 › deleted user 20-Jan-03/6:04 PM Reply
Hello. How's the Volvo and weather in Arizona. What am i talking about? It's always nice there, correct?
[9] deleted user › horus8 20-Jan-03/7:48 PM Reply
warm and dry, anyway.
[9] Ranger 21-Jan-03/1:37 AM Reply
Bonza!
[8] capachijim 11-Dec-03/4:51 PM Reply
nice design -8-
[7] andrewjthomas 10-Jan-04/10:05 PM Reply
hmmm, solid concrete
not sure what you are trying to say though
still, it's good in what it is
[6] dancin_n_da_moonlite 25-Jan-05/11:42 AM Reply
its okay......but it sort of reminds me of a mediocre version of e.e.cummings....
-mega
[0] conny lingers 7-Feb-21/12:29 PM Reply
Ding Dong ZERO points!