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Free verse № 18060

Can't See

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

All I see is black All I see is nothing All I feel is despair They tell me "well at least your other senses are heightened" And the truth is the only one that is strong is my feeling of hatred God pointed his finger at me and just like that I see nothing Faith is a funny word cause now I know there is no use having it I'm glad I can't see cause that's the only thing keeping me from pointing and killing all these fucking people

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[n/a] <~> 30-Sep-02/12:15 PM Reply
try banging your head against a wall. then you can see colors, too, and not just black.
[3] Dark Angle 5-Oct-02/1:04 AM Reply
well how bout i tell you who to kill and you do it then! we would make a great team, and then when you tell the cops it wasnt you, you had someone telling you what to do, you couldnt point me out in a line up! damn this is just too perfect!
[0] Tintagiles 19-Oct-02/6:54 PM Reply
God's laughing at you. So am I.