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Free verse № 182

To walk in a dream in a dream

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 2 comments

To walk in a dream in a dream And the beginning of something new I am, I was but perhaps I did not see A strange reality How nothing belongs to anyone And only my Heart is my own I search the world through molded eyes With desires that aren?t my own Maybe become a water drop ? flow with a stream Know this is a path, feel there is an end I close all light and I cannot see Perhaps I don?t know how to look Perhaps I don?t remember what to see But then this is not real Since I am only my memory - or someone else's And that only for a few moments Or some deep recollection In a feeling of continuation As a circle In a point I am, I was and then no more If only I could remember what I already know My reality Such a beautiful reality My existence And happiness Those things without compensation Easily achieved immortality In a flash of desire The blindfold can break I can relearn to listen Through wounded eyes

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[4] anonymous 21-Jul-01/3:08 AM Reply
unfocused
[n/a] ifni 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
This dances.