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Norman #86

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Oct 2002 · 6 comments

Dear Norman, How are things up There? And do you like the hair? I know I hate it too, Just as I know It bothers you. But that's not why I called, But why I put you on hold. I wanted to ask about Why we haven't taken out, The playful doubts; Or the ones long dead That you put in my head. Can I look in there, Now-- Without crying? Without having to, Aggravate you?

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[9] INTRANSIT 2-Oct-02/6:59 AM Reply

Good, I like it. It takes a couple of readings, that makes it better.
If you care(9. Hi K!

[n/a] Owner of the Sky › INTRANSIT 2-Oct-02/11:30 AM Reply

Hi *grin* glad you like this one. Norman is a bit put off that I am asking to be haunted by past demons again. If you haven't guessed, Norman's in my head (Doh I am sure you got it, never mind). Hi back. You never did tell me your name. :o)

[9] INTRANSIT › Owner of the Sky 2-Oct-02/2:48 PM Reply

No, actually I missed that reference. I'm so used to death and loss of love writings that I got sucked into that vortex.But upon reading again I saw it and got a chuckle too. Thanks, I need those. It's worthy of a higher rating now.;)

[9] INTRANSIT › INTRANSIT 3-Oct-02/4:21 PM Reply

Sorry K, Rich's my name, truckin's the game. 3-8-3! I do need to learn what a syllable is, don't I? I think I may have off-ended P&K in my comments. Hope he's not too mad to talk to me again. I was the defensive one that time, oops! My humble apologies,sir.

[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 2-Oct-02/1:44 PM Reply

see you're still owning the sky...fabulously indiscreet..

[n/a] Owner of the Sky › <{Baba^Yaga}> 2-Oct-02/8:20 PM Reply

"Owner of the Sky" is a song by Cynthia Alexander, I am sure it is on the net somewhere. The lyrics were just amazing and I was listening to it at the time I registered on here, so I used it. I don't presume to own the sky... at best I am an owner of a car, or a playstation, or a PC, but I don't think I'll ever own the sky. Thanks for the vote.