poemranker ::#17 by mikejedw

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Haiku № 18700

#17

by mikejedw

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

Gentle autumn sun detracts from the horizon's flickering cloud bank.

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5 comments

[6] Service 3-Oct-02/9:42 PM Reply
Calming, nice.
[4] Dariana 4-Oct-02/5:05 AM Reply
A great start but it seems like there should be more. I like it.
[8] Nicholas Jones 4-Oct-02/6:41 AM Reply
I can see a flickering cloud bank out of my window, also in autumn sunshine. This poem speaks to me. Normally, I don't like the haiku form, but this is very visual and evocative.
[8] cleverdevice 23-Oct-02/3:58 AM Reply
Very descriptive. It reminds me why I love Autumn.
[8] hipster flare 8-Jan-03/9:18 AM Reply
"detracts" seems awkward. perhaps something more sinister?