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Free verse № 18769

Heartless

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

It's a jealous moon in a thoughtless sky that decides a time for us dear What I have been through its far too much to say it cries all anyway for I fear One day I'll be gone Before your gone i'm confused and broken With you I could revolve the thoughtless moon But I'm heartless, and so are you For that's all I'll ever be

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[7] horus8 17-Jan-03/9:44 PM Reply
would be better maybe,
"For that is all i have ever been."