poemranker ::eerie foggy day by nonee

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eerie foggy day

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Oct 2002 · Edited 20 Oct 2002 · 0 comments

Fog is all around, cold wind cuts through, Leaves shiver and go cold, The lowlands feel it too. Somewhere far, away from my window A soft candle flame, is what I see. Continues to burn, with hopes all high Struggling against every bit For it's righteous path. Flickering in the strong winds, But thriving against . Spreading the light, for me to see. asking, not to throw my hopes away Opening the door for me. To, walk on my two feet again, Yes, I want to live my life Not just efface it all away in this eerie little world...... on this crazy foggy day .

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