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Midnight Dream

by Katie

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Oct 2002 · 10 comments

A feeling of lust, Such ecstasy, They way I felt, With you touching all over me. The moaning and screaming, The feel of you inside of me, Is this wrong? But how could it be, When it felt so right, You on top of me. Just you and me, Our body entangled, Our tongues dancing the tango But I mustn't let my imagination run free, For this was only rp, An Internet relation, Just words on a screen. Nothing more than a midnight dream. (rp=role play)

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10 comments

[7] Flattop 6-Oct-02/11:34 PM Reply
interesting angle on a subject broached by few and tainted with disdain by maintream media
[8] Dark Angle 7-Oct-02/3:19 AM Reply
nice, you nailed it, so when do we get to rp!?
[n/a] UnityMitford 7-Oct-02/8:25 AM Reply
Naughty, naughty! Do your parents know you do this in the dark corners of your bedroom at night after they've gone to sleep?
[n/a] Christof 7-Oct-02/8:38 AM Reply
Maybe the Internet is a good place for the imagination to run free? I don't know. But you'd better hope Mum & Dad don't find out. They won't be keen on that kind of imaginative release.
[9] loneshadow29 7-Oct-02/1:32 PM Reply
I liked how you described each moment... each moment of your sensual dream, brought upon the computer screen... good read Katie :O)
[10] Miggy 12-Oct-02/10:54 AM Reply
this is just sooo funny. It's like it actually happened (hoping it didn't) lol, but great work
[n/a] Katie › Miggy 16-Oct-02/1:43 PM Reply
No worries Miggy, it didn't happen, it's just a joke me and my friend Jeff have. I didn't expect it to do as well as it as, but I am glad it did, and I got some interesting reponses from it!! But sorry no I'm not some chick that goes out cybering, I myself find it childish, and...ewww'ish!! =) hehe.
[1] razorgrin 16-Oct-02/7:24 AM Reply
It's funny at least. Sorry kitty, you don't write well enough to do too much for me. on the other hand, if anonymous online diddling with the morbidly obese Everquest player described by Dark Angel is what puts a smile on your face, who am I to judge?
[1] god'swife 21-Oct-02/11:08 PM Reply
Yucky. That is so totally gross!!! How could you even think of role-playing with someone on the internet? I mean, they could be a pervert or something, like maybe they own a laundromat called sudsorama, and they steal little girl's knickers from hampers when noones looking. Or worse you could be getting off with some old prof who touches his weenie while he's standing up behind that wood thing that holds his papers and stuff. Crusty residue on the sleeve of his tweed jacket. Ewww. Or it could be an lady whos so fat she doesn't leave the house and pretends she's a dude.
[n/a] Katie › god'swife 25-Oct-02/5:10 AM Reply
If you didn't pay attention to the comment I mad after Miggy's, It's A JOKE!! With me and one of my friends Jeff. But I do agree with your point.