poemranker ::Thy Lovely Eyes by dalva

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Thy Lovely Eyes

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

I was powerless to look away. . . not even for a moment. The vision of her deep dark eyes. . . was forever etched in my mind. Her lovely gaze penetrated my soul. . . igniting emotions that I was afraid to expose. Even when my eyes closed. . . her enchanting stare was still there. Every time I looked into her sweet soulful eyes. . . the desire to reveal my true feelings grew. I must find a way to bare my heart and soul. . . so she can know how much her lovely eyes mean to me.

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[7] deleted user 3-Nov-02/7:01 AM Reply
Thats sweet :)
[7] horus8 22-Jan-03/7:28 PM Reply
well it at least maintains a strong notion.