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Free verse № 19101

Short poem

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

I couldn't stand to be left in the presence of you... now I only stand in the hereafter..

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[6] deleted user 1-Nov-02/8:37 PM Reply
I feel like I want a little more with this, but maybe that's just me. It is nice to see something short and sweet. You missed a dot on your last elipsis (sorry, I'm nit-picky ...I appreciate when people notice little things like that for me).