poemranker ::Angels by Reuben Spiteri

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Free verse № 19135

Angels

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 6 comments

Singing of angels From different worlds Falling from heavens Giving new births Shouting of Mantras a harmony of words carried all over cruising with birds over the Himalaya teaching everyone about Maya teaching everything about freedom breaking the ring, in which we get attached and cannot break free .... until the singing of angels

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6 comments

[10] vulcan 8-Oct-02/12:24 AM Reply
O very nice!I really enjoy reading your poems.feelings are expressed happily!That's effective.wish you more success.
[10] vulcan 8-Oct-02/12:24 AM Reply
10
[2] Tarquin De La Bog 9-Oct-02/11:55 AM Reply
You've got a great name, Reuben Spiteri; almost as good as mine. Unfortunately, this poem is far from great. 2. There is nothing here to stir any kind of emotion in me. Bland as bland can be.
[n/a] Reuben Spiteri › Tarquin De La Bog 9-Oct-02/10:34 PM Reply
thks for ur compliments about my name.... de la bog

that's is the beuty of art.... someone see's a poem and gives it 10, someone elses sees it and gives it 1...

nobody see's the same picture
[7] cleverdevice 5-Nov-02/3:28 AM Reply
Hmm, cliched, shallow, meaningless. Only joking. Unlike some of the bastards here I think all poetry is good as long as it means something to the author.
[7] cleverdevice › cleverdevice 5-Nov-02/3:29 AM Reply
(Sorry I had to use you as an example.)