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Letter to a Friend

by Reuben Spiteri

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

Looking at a mirror Seeing your tool Don't be blind That is not you Find yourself brother You are inside The body is the carrier Of your Divine Light Take care of your carrier But decorate your light As when you leave this world The vessel is left behind But the knowledge and wisdom From them you never part So decorate your spirit To this life you are not bound

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[9] vulcan 8-Oct-02/12:21 AM Reply
Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9
[6] Bachus 8-Oct-02/12:18 PM Reply
the fox and the hound....did this subject more justice. my forehead furrows mr. spiteri.6.