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Deceive Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

Hold my hand, draw me close, Put your arms around me, Look deep into my eyes, As if you'll never say good-bye Keep me warm, even for a while, Say I'm an angel, The sweetest one you've ever met The one you'll never forget Tilt your head, inches from mine, Capture my lips, kiss me gently, Take me to a special place, Protect me with your sweet embrace Say you've been thinking lately And you realize you're in love Tell me that you love me Even if you must deceive me Say I'm your everything You can't live without me And honey, I'll be yours, Even if you're not mine

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[3] devina 9-Oct-02/1:45 PM Reply
Okey enough... I didn't get a rythm or not a rythm, it was a little bit humpy.... but the text easn't bad at all.