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Free verse № 1973

Wasted

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 May 2002 · Edited 15 May 2002 · 1 comment

Nightmares become reality, and reality fades away into its own insanity. Lonely hearts bleed pain. Tired eyes shed toxic tears. Exhausted minds breed insanity. What will tomorrow bring? Lost in the familiarity, Forgotten in the crowds, Tired lonely little girl Wasting away in front of your eyes. You're a little girl Wasting away your dreams Tired goodbyes Exhausted threats You're a little girl Wasting away in front of your eyes. What happened to yesterday? Constantly shifting emotions Forever changing devotions The state of mind is lost Wondering how far I can push myself Sometimes I wonder if--I--am--more--than--just--me.

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[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Jan-03/12:10 PM Reply
I like it