poemranker ::Holly by wlshepherd

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Free verse № 2014

Holly

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 May 2002 · 1 comment

She came out of the forest With leaves in her hands, And twigs in her hair. I tried to take them out But they were caught, Snagged, stuck, The spines and rips Holding onto her fast. She kept asking me to stop, But who was I to stop? She went into the forest With leaves and twigs, And her hands in her hair.

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[9] -=SeTTle=- 10-Jul-02/2:43 PM Reply
Good work LET'S PARTY