Angel

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Oct 2002 · Edited 14 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

An angel wispered softly in my ear sang the songs that i long to hear we danced untill the sun went down and when he touched me i knew i was touched by an angel i had the perfect dream just lookin at his eyes i felt so pure touchin him the way he held me that night i will never forget how sweet it was to lose my self in him he was an angel my angel

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[0] poetandknowit 13-Oct-02/9:48 PM Reply

Good god this is bad, and correcting the typos will not make it better. Good try though. Keep it up!!

[1] Tintagiles 18-Oct-02/1:38 PM Reply

Did he have wings? Wouldn't that create an inbalance while dancing? Wouldn't you be afraid of tripping on them?

[0] deleted user 25-Nov-02/12:50 AM Reply

YOU TWAT you stole it go suck off a monkey cum back and write a poem about the discomft and pain of that!!!! to be honnest its too happy !!! AND also writing poems aobut angels is a god loving fucked up christian kind of thing to do go fuck your self your god too

[n/a] Mutant_X › deleted user 15-Jan-03/2:10 PM Reply

i can't belive there are still ppl like you!! besides i aint even christian,and by the way,poetry is alot more than ur stupid shallow words

[8] Ranger 26-Nov-02/2:03 AM Reply

Do you listen to Santana a lot?