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uninvited guests

by teacup

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

Little black dots. Across my kitchen floor. They caught me by surprise. So I go to the cupboard, I get what I need. Then I scream "die, foul ants, die!!"

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[10] razorgrin 1-Nov-02/6:56 AM Reply
The single worst point in my life was when I found out my house had ants, by pouring ant-infested cereal into a bowl. didn't eat cereal for a very long time after.
[7] horus8 10-Dec-02/12:01 PM Reply
sweet water melon seeds they're everywhere!e